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Dear professor, this is the check-in message from Shiyu Li. Thank you ---Michael LSY (talk) 22:03, 8 November 2018 (UTC)

Welcome to Wikipedia Michael LSY! --- FULBERT (talk) 20:25, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi Professor, I have made some minor edits to my article, please review them here https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jimmy_Choo_Ltd&action=history, please let me know if you have any additional feedback for this assignment or my article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jimmy_Choo_Ltd. Thank you Kmas 77 (talk) 02:10, 11 November 2018 (UTC)

Looks all in order Kmas 77. Thanks! --- FULBERT (talk) 20:26, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

Dear professor, I don't know why my week 1 check-in message disappears. So, I will resubmit this. This is the check-in message from Yiming Cui. Thank you! --Yiming Cui (talk) 20:41, 11 November 2018 (UTC)

It may have been archived, but this is fine Yiming Cui! --- FULBERT (talk) 20:28, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

Dear professor, this is the check-in message from Yiming Cui for week 2. Please check my article evaluation. Here is the link https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yiming_Cui/sandbox --Yiming Cui (talk) 20:59, 11 November 2018 (UTC)

Good points on the evaluation. The article itself is so short, which suggests more information itself is needed for comprehensiveness Yiming Cui. --- FULBERT (talk) 20:29, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi Professor, please check out my sandbox for my comments regarding my article review: User:Rachelma114/sandbox Thanks! Have a nice day! --Rachelma114 (talk) 01:44, 12 November 2018 (UTC)

Good points all Rachelma114. --- FULBERT (talk) 20:31, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi Professor, please check out my sandbox for my comments regarding my article review. Here is the link https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tongxin_Liu/sandbox. Thank you Tongxin Liu (talk) 14:36, 12 November 2018 (UTC)

This seems all in order Tongxin Liu. Great! --- FULBERT (talk) 20:32, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, here is my sandbox article review link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dvcap/sandbox

Article: Separation anxiety in dogs
Link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Separation_anxiety_in_dogs

Good evaluation overall Dvcap. --- FULBERT (talk) 20:34, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

Thank you. --- Dvcap (talk) 21:07, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

Qhdud12 (talk) 01:20, 15 November 2018 (UTC) Hi Professor, please check my sandbox for an article evaluation. Thanks. Here is the link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Qhdud12/sandbox

Link to the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Korean_beauty_standards Qhdud12 (talk) 01:20, 15 November 2018 (UTC)

Good issues you noticed in your evaluation of this article Qhdud12. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:09, 17 November 2018 (UTC)

Hello Professor, I have certain edits on the article and also made a recommendation for the changing the structure of a sentence as it doesn't convey the meaning effectively. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Sport_in_India#Kite-flying_edit https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Sport_in_India&action=history

VogueRover7 (talk) 01:25, 15 November 2018 (UTC)VogueRover7

I offered a response to you VogueRover7 in the Talk page where you made a comment. Also, when you sign your posts, just include the ~~~~ once, it seems there is more information that appears after your signature so it appears you are adding more information there. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:12, 17 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, this is Wenlin and just come to say hi Bunny233 (talk) 12:56, 17 November 2018 (UTC)

Welcome to Wikipedia Bunny233. Hope you find this the first of many steps in contributing to the open knowledge movement! --- FULBERT (talk) 15:26, 17 November 2018 (UTC)

Good night professor! I've just removed the text from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Separation_anxiety_in_dogs that was not following the Wikipedia policy. --- Dvcap (talk) 23:17, 16 November 2018 (UTC)

Good catch on that Dvcap. In your edit summary some of the words had some coding. To make that easier next time, include a [[ ]] around coding pointing people to Wikipedia policies that you are mentioning in your corrections. For example, on my own Sandbox, in the bullets I have listed after "Links I frequently use when reverting intentional or unintentional vandalism:" I just copy and paste the text to the right of the hyphen, not including the text to the left of it. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:22, 17 November 2018 (UTC)

Thanks again! --- Dvcap (talk) 17:19, 17 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, here's the link for my first copyedits. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Recommender_system&action=history. I corrected some grammar errors. For example, I changed "user based" to "user-based", removed spaces in "items/users", and etc. --Rachelma114 (talk) 17:23, 17 November 2018 (UTC)

Very basic edits, but every edit that improves an article helps knowledge to be more open and accurate Rachelma114. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:46, 17 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, I've made some minor changes to an article called "Korean beauty standards". I've also left a feedback on its talk page for some suggestions. Here are the links: Minor grammar changes: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Korean_beauty_standards&action=history Suggestion: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Korean_beauty_standards

Thank you! Qhdud12 (talk) 18:55, 17 November 2018 (UTC)

Replied to you there Qhdud12, and always remember that Wikipedia articles are crowdsourced and collective. There is no "you," there is only a "we," so always a good practice to check in on the Talk page and Be Bold and edit with evidence! --- FULBERT (talk) 19:55, 17 November 2018 (UTC)

Hello professor, please see the link for my first copyedits https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Eating_disorder&action=history. Basically, I did some changes on punctuation and order of words, and caught a spelling error and two grammatical errors. I feel this is challenging for non-native speakers like me because sometimes language is just so tricky.Bunny233 (talk) 16:26, 17 November 2018 (UTC)

Please adjust the previous assignment and then re-ping me and I will take a look at this one Bunny233. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:34, 17 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, just letting you know that I've adjusted my previous assignment. Bunny233 (talk) 01:57, 18 November 2018 (UTC)

Thanks; good corrective edits overall Bunny233. When making many small changes on an article, it may be quicker to do all of them at once and then save. Otherwise fine. --- FULBERT (talk) 02:56, 18 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, this is wenlin and please see the link for my article review User:Bunny233/sandbox. Thanks.Bunny233 (talk) 14:44, 17 November 2018 (UTC)

I do not know which article you are offering a critique of. Can you add a link to that both here as a reply and in your Sandbox Bunny233? Thanks --- FULBERT (talk) 15:27, 17 November 2018 (UTC)

Sorry, my bad. Here's the article link for my review:[[1]], and I'll also add it in my sandbox. Thanks for your reminder. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bunny233 (talk • contribs) 16:05, 17 November 2018 (UTC)

This was not signed Bunny233. Please reply here and sign it and then I will review. Thanks. —- FULBERT (talk) 16:38, 17 November 2018 (UTC)

Oops, not sure why it was unsigned. Please see the link for the article:[[2]], and I also added it in my sandbox.Bunny233 (talk) 01:51, 18 November 2018 (UTC)

Thanks Bunny233. Done. --- FULBERT (talk) 02:57, 18 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, here is the link for my first copyedits https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Marketing_performance_measurement&action=history. Some noun phrases seem to be missing a determiner before them. So I added the determiner to these phrases to be more specific. I also removed unnecessary and incorrect commas and added the specific link for the term cost per lead which will be easy to find the meaning and understand the term. Thank you. Have a good night!Tongxin Liu (talk) 04:38, 18 November 2018 (UTC)

Some of the edits may have been a bit too much, but overall they are helpful Tongxin Liu. --- FULBERT (talk) 13:05, 18 November 2018 (UTC)

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https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Divorce_in_the_United_States&action=history I have made some spelling correction to this article.--Jiayu Zuo (talk) 04:40, 19 November 2018 (UTC)

Nice minor edits, Jiayu Zuo. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:35, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

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Hi professor, I have made a minor change to the wiki ariticle "Data pre-processing", adding some brief introductions of typical data preprocessing methods for readers' comprehensiveness about how to do data pre-processing. Here is the link of my revision history: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Data_pre-processing&action=history Thank you!--Yiming Cui (talk) 22:11, 17 November 2018 (UTC)

This addition is fine Yiming Cui but you need to provide a source for it. I would normally undo it as unsourced. Do you have an article or other credible reference you can use to substantiate or provide evidence for it? That is the assignment for this coming week, but I think this is needed now. Please take a look at the training session for this week for how to add a source and add it today to prevent this change from being undone --- FULBERT (talk) 13:02, 18 November 2018 (UTC)

Sure, professor, I am going to do it now. Thank you.--Yiming Cui (talk) 19:56, 18 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, I have finished providing sources for the content I added. Please review it: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Data_pre-processing&action=history Thank you.--Yiming Cui (talk) 20:17, 18 November 2018 (UTC)

Thanks Yiming Cui. This seems in order now. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:47, 20 November 2018 (UTC)

Dear professor, this is the check-in message from Michael_LSY for week 2. Please check my article evaluation. Here is the link User:Michael_LSY/sandbox.Michael LSY (talk) 20:25, 18 November 2018 (UTC)

This is fine Michael LSY. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:50, 20 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, here is the link https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Sharing_economy&action=history for my first copyedits. I did some grammar check, please have a look.--Michael LSY (talk) 20:43, 18 November 2018 (UTC)

Always a good idea to start off with simple edits Michael LSY. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:51, 20 November 2018 (UTC)

Hey there professor this is my official check-in message. Thanks! VCM260 (talk) 22:16, 18 November 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for the check-in and welcome VCM260! Please when you enter these in the future, click the New Section button above and enter it in that way. That will maintain the chronological order. You manually added them at the top and I then moved them back into the actual order. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:57, 20 November 2018 (UTC)

Professor here's the link to my sandbox please advise. Thanks! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:VCM260/sandbox VCM260 (talk) 22:54, 18 November 2018 (UTC)

Good points on your review VCM260. BTW, you only need to include your username and assignment on the title. --- FULBERT (talk) 19:58, 20 November 2018 (UTC)

Here is my edit and revision https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:VCM260&action=history thanks! VCM260 (talk) 23:14, 18 November 2018 (UTC)

This is supposed to be initial revisions on an article VCM260, and not on your own page. Please assign yourself an article for review through the dashboard and make some simple edits that are needed on that article itself. Then, please reping me and I will take a look. --- FULBERT (talk) 20:00, 20 November 2018 (UTC)

Good evening professor, here is the edit I made for film Free Solo https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Free_Solo&action=history During the editing, I added a detail in the instruction part, and added one section about the filming. Yq712 (talk) 00:09, 19 November 2018 (UTC)

Nice additions overall Yq712. --- FULBERT (talk) 20:06, 20 November 2018 (UTC)

hi professor, here's the link of the article I read. Thanks. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Operational_risk--Yt1416 (talk) 23:46, 18 November 2018 (UTC)

This link is broken. Please fix the link Yt1416, provide a link to your Sandbox where your review of it should be, and then ping me again and I will take a look. --- FULBERT (talk) 20:09, 20 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, I attached a wrong link last time. Please check my evaluation here, thanks! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yt1416/sandboxYt1416 (talk) 03:41, 19 November 2018 (UTC)

Ah, this is the correct link for the assignment. All set now Yt1416. --- FULBERT (talk) 20:10, 20 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, I did some grammar check, changed the order of words to help reading and added few comma to where I think it's necessary. Please check.https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Operational_risk&action=historyYt1416 (talk) 04:27, 19 November 2018 (UTC)

Good edits overall Yt1416. --- FULBERT (talk) 20:12, 20 November 2018 (UTC)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jiayu_Zuo/sandbox This is my article evaluation--Jiayu Zuo (talk) 04:39, 19 November 2018 (UTC)

Please fix what I initially asked you to fix from Week 1 and ping me again Jiayu Zuo and I will check that and these newer posts. --- FULBERT (talk) 20:16, 20 November 2018 (UTC)

I took a look at this now, and all seems in order Jiayu Zuo. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:35, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Dear professor, here is my sandbox page. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yq712/sandbox Yq712 (talk) 22:29, 18 November 2018 (UTC)

I think this could have been a little more detailed in your response, but ok for now Yq712. --- FULBERT (talk) 20:03, 20 November 2018 (UTC)

I will add more details. Thank you. Yq712 (talk) 21:41, 20 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, here is the link Sharing_economy for my Contribute new content. I added one benefit of sharing economy. Please check the new content.--Michael LSY (talk) 20:04, 23 November 2018 (UTC)

Great edits Michael LSY, and nice to see another editor who was likely watching the page then added more information. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:02, 24 November 2018 (UTC)

Hello Professor, I have added some more name of the players in the article "Tennis in India" who are representing the country. Below is the link where I have made the edit and added the citation.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tennis_in_India#History. Have a nice weekend. VogueRover7 (talk) 22:48, 22 November 2018 (UTC)VogueRover7

Good additions VogueRover7, especially as you also linked those to other articles already on Wikipedia. --- FULBERT (talk) 14:05, 24 November 2018 (UTC)

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Hi Professor, please find the new additions to my article here https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jimmy_Choo_Ltd#Cultural_references, under the cultural references. Thank you Kmas 77 (talk) 02:03, 24 November 2018 (UTC)

This is fine, Kmas 77. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:39, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, here is the link for my article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marketing_performance_measurement. Please check the new additions https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Marketing_performance_measurement&action=history. Thank you. Have a good night.Tongxin Liu (talk) 05:36, 25 November 2018 (UTC)

Nice changes Tongxin Liu. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:46, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi Professor, please see the link for my new article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dolce_%26_Gabbana#Shanghai_event_promotion_video, and https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Dolce_%26_Gabbana&action=history for my contributions to the content and the references. Thanks.Bunny233 (talk) 06:36, 25 November 2018 (UTC)

Nice edits to an active article page Bunny233. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:49, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, here is the article Data Pre-processing I edited https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Data_pre-processing And here are the diffs https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Data_pre-processing&action=history I added some brief introductions of typical data preprocessing methods and their sources for comprehensiveness. Please check it, thank you.--Yiming Cui (talk) 21:05, 25 November 2018 (UTC)

Great additions Yiming Cui. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:51, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Good evening professor, here is the new change I made for the wiki article. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Free_Solo&action=history I added some more details with the reference. - Yq712 (talk) 01:26, 26 November 2018 (UTC)

Nice add Yq712. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:54, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, here is the link for my article:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Effects_of_divorce#Uncontested_Divorce,and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Effects_of_divorce#cite_note-14,for my contributions to the content and the references. Thank you!--Jiayu Zuo (talk) 02:53, 26 November 2018 (UTC)

Great addition of content Jiayu Zuo. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:55, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, I add new content to this article with its reference https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Operational_risk_management and here's the link https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Operational_risk_management&action=history, please check--Yt1416 (talk) 03:09, 26 November 2018 (UTC)

Nice addition to this article Yt1416. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:58, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi Professor, These are my edits for week 3. I added some content that is missing in the SAQ section. Gl1147 (talk) 18:24, 27 November 2018 (UTC)

Great additions Gl1147. --- FULBERT (talk) 02:01, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi Professor,These are my edits for week 4. I added recent news about controversial use of CRISPR on human embryos that has caused lots of discussions. Gl1147 (talk) 19:07, 27 November 2018 (UTC)

I combined your post here into a smaller space. You do not need to include line breaks or paragraph breaks in the response. Nice addition Gl1147. --- FULBERT (talk) 02:05, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, here is the link Bicycle-sharing_system and Collaborative_consumption for my continue editing. Please check the new content.--Michael LSY (talk) 22:41, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

Great edits Michael LSY. --- FULBERT (talk) 02:31, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, I've added the last two paragraphs in the history section of https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Artificial_intelligence with two peer reviewed article's citations. --- Dvcap (talk) 20:14, 27 November 2018 (UTC)

Even though your change was reverted by another editor Dvcap , I will still give you credit. Consider making some minor changes to the page again, with evidence, step by step after revising per the other feedback. --- FULBERT (talk) 02:13, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Thank you! --- Dvcap (talk) 03:55, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi Professor, here's the link for the article I edited:Recommender_system_wikipedia; here's the link for the diffs (changes in Wikipedia), which including adding sentences in the mobile recommendation systems and add citations: [[3]] Here's the link for the page of view history: [[4]]. Thanks! Have a nice weekend! --Rachelma114 (talk) 04:14, 25 November 2018 (UTC)

You inserted the change but did not insert the citation to where you made the edit. Please go back and add that and then ping me here and I will again review Rachelma114. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:44, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi Professor, I've added the citation. Here's the link of diffs: [[5]]. Here's the link for the article:Recommender_system_wikipedia. Thanks for the review! Have a nice weekend! --Rachelma114 (talk) 20:53, 30 November 2018 (UTC)

Nice citation insert. Next time, include additional explanation of it as well, but good for now Rachelma114. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:59, 1 December 2018 (UTC)

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Hi professor, I assigned two new articles to myself, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Library_2.0 and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Online_vetting. I’ve added one new topic named as Artificial Intelligence and Participatory Library (Library 2.0) to Library 2.0 Wiki with one reference and the last paragraph with its reference in Views and practice topic on Online vetting article. --- Dvcap (talk) 22:04, 1 December 2018 (UTC)

Great adds with citations Dvcap. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:27, 4 December 2018 (UTC)

Hi Professor, I added an image in https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Library_2.0 and an image in https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Separation_anxiety_in_dogs. Best regards, --- Dvcap (talk) 22:39, 1 December 2018 (UTC)

Great adds on both Dvcap. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:29, 4 December 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, here are my answers to the Bonus extra point:
Q: What your experience was like (overall) with this Wikipedia course assignment.
A: I've enjoyed the experience with Wikipedia but I would like to have more time to dig on it during the course of our class. The overall evaluation is very positive.
Q: What you learned.
A: I’ve learned a couple of things such as how accurate the content of Wikipedia could be, how to edit articles and communicate respecting the policies of Wikipedia, how to find and undo misdoing or mistakes from other contributors, how to evaluate articles, learned about plagiarism, citations and images/media copyrights.
Q: Why / why not you intend to continue editing on Wikipedia.
A: I do have intention to keep editing and contributing to Wikipedia about themes I really enjoy talking and learn. It is also an excellent way to trainee my writing and reading skills. In addition, It feels good to contribute by increasing and improving the knowledge of a subject I really like to a broad audience.
Best regards --- Dvcap (talk) 02:54, 2 December 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for sharing some of your thoughts here Dvcap. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:30, 4 December 2018 (UTC)

Hello Professor, these articles have added the names of the players. For this article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/All_India_Tennis_Association I have added a new section named as Rio Olympics and for this article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nike,_Inc. have added the name of tennis players sponsored by Nike.

Great on one, but the other you used Nike as its own soource; can you find an external, reliable 3rd party source to substantiate that claim? We should not use a company's own website to establish their own claims. Make the edit and ping me here again VogueRover7. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:46, 4 December 2018 (UTC)

What your experience was like (overall) with this Wikipedia course assignment. We search for information when we need information and the first search option was Wikipedia. It feels good to contribute to Wikipedia and be part of the community that edifies everyone with the information we need.

What you learned. The first thing that I have learned that it was very important to have a verifiable and accurate information presented in the article as many people rely on the information that may not be factually correct in another internet searches. Second it I was important to have an effective communication with the author and express the correction or edit you are planning to introduce. Third, it is important to maintain the authenticity of the picture without violating any copyrights. Why / why not you intend to continue editing on Wikipedia. It great to have a medium or a community in which I can share and discuss the information we all rely on. It will also provide a mean to correct any wrong information that may be misleading and cause any kind of inconvenience.VogueRover7 (talk) 21:22, 2 December 2018 (UTC)VogueRover7

Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this VogueRover7. Hope you keep this up! --- FULBERT (talk) 15:49, 4 December 2018 (UTC)

Hello Professor, I have added the picture for the article.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/All_India_Tennis_Association

Good image insert that still respects the open copyright VogueRover7. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:48, 4 December 2018 (UTC)

--- FULBERT, I have added a new source. But I had added additional sources of the players as well confirming their sponsorship. I used the Nike source as it was from the Investor's report VogueRover7 (talk) 18:18, 4 December 2018 (UTC)VogueRover7

Thanks VogueRover7. All set. --- FULBERT (talk) 23:20, 4 December 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, here is the link Mobike and Ofo_(company) for week 6 . Please check the new content.--Michael LSY (talk) 21:37, 2 December 2018 (UTC)

This is fine Michael LSY. --- FULBERT (talk) 23:27, 4 December 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, here are my answers for bonus. What your experience was like (overall) with this Wikipedia course assignment? I like the Wikipedia course assignment, the articles are written in neutral point of view. I can learn lots of knowledge by reading Wikipedia. What you learned? I learn how to add new content and citation in articles. In this process, I know the sentences in articles should be proved. That's great. Why / why not you intend to continue editing on Wikipedia? I intend to continue editing on Wikipedia. It's a good place to learn knowledge cause you can believe the content, and if you have question with the content, you can search the citation to make a sure. I would like to edit because I want to follow the news and update the news to Wikipedia. For example, a promising sharing economy business model in this year may lose customer in the next year. So by continue editing, the Wikipedia content will be updated. Best regards--Michael LSY (talk) 21:57, 2 December 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for the overall feedback; hoping you continue with editing Wikipedia Michael LSY. --- FULBERT (talk) 23:28, 4 December 2018 (UTC)

Hi Professor, please see these two articles in which I have added some content https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Smoking_in_Norway and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pisaurina. Thank you Kmas 77 (talk) 02:57, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

Great edits Kmas 77; very interesting selection of articles as well. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:04, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Hi, professor please see these two articles where I have added images. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tokyo_City_Air_Terminal#Information_and_ticketing and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jockey#Women_jockeys. Thank you Kmas 77 (talk) 03:41, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

Two more very interesting articles Kmas 77. Nice additions. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:06, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Hi Professor, my experience working with Wikipedia has been very positive. I started this assignment knowing very little about how Wikipedia worked and I mostly thought that it was people adding content to articles but I didn't know that the quality assurance process was so meticulous and well supervised. Getting to participate in adding content and editing articles has been very rewarding as a contributor and user, I now have a deeper understanding, respect, and appreciation for this website and the importance of the work all its users add to it. I have learned the importance of citing articles properly and using appropriate content such as media photos or videos in order to protect the content and properly credit the owners of the material. I also have learned that most of the information within Wikipedia is fact-based, I use to think it was like a blog where people wrote their opinions on certain articles, I intend to continue adding content to Wikipedia for articles that are low rated in order to practice what I have learned during the 6 weeks and gain more experience, then I can move on to more important articles where I can provide and add vital information to them (without getting chew up by the more experienced Wikipedia users). Kmas 77 (talk) 03:58, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for sharing about what you learned here, Kmas 77. I hope you keep this up! --- FULBERT (talk) 01:07, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, these are the two topics I edited. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Humour&action=history https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Shenzhen&action=history Please check--Yt1416 (talk) 04:12, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

Nice edits Yt1416. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:12, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

What your experience was like (overall) with this Wikipedia course assignment? It was great. I never thought that I would help editing topics/articles on Wikipedia one day! What you learned? I was surprised when I know that actually everyone could edit the topics on Wikipedia. And now I know how to edit and help improve the content of an article. It's important to be neutral and the content we put on wikipedia should be able to traced back to a reliable sources. Why / why not you intend to continue editing on Wikipedia? I would like to continue editing on Wikipedia for the topics/articles I'm interested in. For example, Shenzhen is my hometown and it has been ranked second on the list of ‘top 10 cities to visit in 2019 by Lonely Planet. I added this information to the Introduction of Shenzhen. I'll keep editing for other topics on Wikipedia, sharing the latest information or knowledge with others. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yt1416 (talk • contribs) 04:40, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this Yt1416. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:17, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, here are the articles that I edit: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Guangzhou; https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Facial_expression Here are the changes that I made: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Guangzhou#cite_note-18 https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Facial_expression#cite_note-4 Thank you !!--Jiayu Zuo (talk) 04:43, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

A couple awkward statements, but already they were edited. Great next steps Jiayu Zuo. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:20, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Q: What your experience was like (overall) with this Wikipedia course assignment. A: My experience with this Wikipedia course is great! I have never had a chance to get in touch with this kind of assignment and I learned a lot. Q: What you learned. A: I learned how to add links to Wikipedia and things I wanted to modify. At the same time, I also learned the knowledge and rules to prevent plagiarism Q: What your experience was like (overall) with this Wikipedia course assignment. A: Excellent! I love this course. It is a lot of fun. Q: Why / why not you intend to continue editing on Wikipedia. A: I think I will continue to edit on Wikipedia if I have a chance after this assignment because this can help people to know more about the knowledge they want to know and it can also enrich my knowledge.--Jiayu Zuo (talk) 04:54, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for the overall feedback; hoping you continue with this Jiayu Zuo. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:21, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Dear professor, the first article I edited is Data Analysis. I added information about what role data analysis is playing in today's business and its source. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Data_analysis&action=history The second article I edited is Data Mining. I added the difference between data analysis and data mining and its source. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Data_mining&action=history --Yiming Cui (talk) 05:26, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

Nice additions Yiming Cui to the articles. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:24, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Dear professor, the first article I edited is Data Pre-processing. I Modified the definition of data normalization. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Data_pre-processing&action=history The second article I edited is Tableau Software. I added content about the use of Tableau in companies and its source. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Tableau_Software&action=history --Yiming Cui (talk) 08:08, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

I do not think these were the strongest references you could have found, though I think they are ok for now. Odd that one was reverted Yiming Cui. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:27, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

What your experience was like (overall) with this Wikipedia course assignment. My experience with this Wikipedia course assignment is perfect. Previously, I only looked for information from Wikipedia. After I did the whole assignments, I have become a person who contributed to Wikipedia. What you learned. I learned Wikipedia's components, how to evaluate an article, and how to edit a Wikipedia article. And citations are important to support the edits. Why / why not you intend to continue editing on Wikipedia. I intend to continue editing on Wikipedia because I got a lot of useful information from Wikipedia in the past, I should contribute my own knowledge to it to help others.--Yiming Cui (talk) 08:20, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

I hope you are able to keep up with this Yiming Cui. Thanks for sharing your thoughts on it. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:28, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, there are the two links about the articles I edited: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Marketing_strategy&action=history and https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Marketing_mix&action=history. Thank you. Have a nice week.Tongxin Liu (talk) 08:16, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

Nice additions Tongxin Liu. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:30, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Hello professor, here is a link to my article: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Korean_beauty_standards&action=history This is what I've contributed for week 4. Please review thank you! Qhdud12 (talk) 19:37, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

Nice edits to this article Qhdud12. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:44, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Hello professor, here are the links to my 2 other articles that I made edits to: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Gender_equality&action=history https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Gender_pay_gap&action=history Thanks! Qhdud12 (talk) 23:19, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

These were links to the Talk: pages and not the diffs for the articles themselves, though overall ok Qhdud12. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:46, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Hi Professor, below is link for the Articles I edited. First one: Article link: [[6]] Diffs link: [[7]] Second one: Article link: [[8]] Diffs link: [[9]]. Thanks! --Rachelma114 (talk) 21:41, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

The edits need some minor clean-up of the language, but overall fine Rachelma114. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:49, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Hi Professor, I added a picture of Brooklyn bridge carousel. Here's the link for the article: [[10]] Here's the link for the diffs: [[11]] Thanks! It's really fun! --Rachelma114 (talk) 01:36, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

The photo is a bit dated, but it fits in the context Rachelma114. Nice find overall. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:52, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Hi professor, I edited two new articles, Meru_(film) and Jimmy Chin. I added two sentences for each of the articles with references. Here is my editing history: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Meru_(film)&action=history and https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jimmy_Chin&action=history - Yq712 (talk) 06:15, 4 December 2018 (UTC)

Nice edits overall Yq712. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:58, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Hi Professor, I added a trail map file in the infobox of Killington Ski Resort page. However you suggested that the edit might be reverted due to copyright issues of the file. I followed proper procedures for uploading files to wiki commons for files that didn't specify copyright holders and license. Thanks! Gl1147 (talk) 01:47, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

I looked at the file and agree it probably should not have been uploaded to WikiCommons given copyright issues Gl1147. OK for this now as you learned this in the process. --- FULBERT (talk) 02:21, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

What your experience was like (overall) with this Wikipedia course assignment.
Overall it is a great learning experience to be part of the wikipedia community. Although there is a learning curve, assignments are reasonably designed for student to learn from the basic to intermediate editing.

What you learned.
I learned how to edited source, cite references properly, review changes, and create watchlist for articles that I am interested in.

Why / why not you intend to continue editing on Wikipedia.
I use wikipedia on a daily basis and it is part of user's responsibility to maintain the biggest free online encyclopedia and make sure it is up to date and accurate. It also allows me to interact with world of scholars and learn from them. Gl1147 (talk) 02:00, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback on this Gl1147. I hope you keep up with editing! --- FULBERT (talk) 02:22, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Hi, professor, here is the link for the image I added https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Madison_Square_Garden&action=history. Please review it. Thank you. Have a good night.Tongxin Liu (talk) 01:35, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Nice edit Tongxin Liu. --- FULBERT (talk) 02:27, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

1. What your experience was like (overall) with this Wikipedia course assignment. A really unforgettable experience. Thank you for providing the opportunity to have access to edit the wikipedia. It’s hard to imagine that I can edit the wikipedia by myself before this class. Because I thought only experts can do this work. I realized everyone can edit the wikipedia after enough investigation about the specific field. 2. What you learned. I learned the importance of doing research. After the abundant research, the accurate conclusion can be made. If there is not enough research, the conclusion will be uncompleted and biased. 3. Why / why not you intend to continue editing on Wikipedia. I will intend to continue editing on Wikipedia after this class. Because I find there are many articles which don’t include the related images. Images provide a more direct way to understand and I often enjoy taking photos in daily life. I can combine my hobby with editing wikipedia which is really a meaningful thing. So I will continue to edit on Wikipedia and add more images to provide a more direct way for people to understand the related articles. Thank you so muchTongxin Liu (talk) 01:53, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Great to hear about your experiences with this Tongxin Liu. I hope you keep up the editing! --- FULBERT (talk) 02:28, 5 December 2018 (UTC)